Blog #4

 Plans for Revisions

After looking over my revisions, there was a long list of various changes that I need to make in order to better my final submission. My main flaw is the fact that my ideas did become a little scattered throughout my paper; and, I tried to establish different categories that seemed to be forced. One main focus during my revisions is to recreate an outline and re-establish a different flow. I think this would fix the scattered thoughts and would naturally delete the unneeded categories that I included. I also need to include two more sources into my paper. With this added revision, I would have a better paper that meets the requirements. 

I plan to complete my outline by the end of this week. My goal is to just follow the outline that I have already established to prevent my previous mistakes from repeating.